Thursday, April 30, 2020
The Girl Lost In The Mountains
I hope you enjoy reading my story i have been doing my own story's and this story took me 3 hours to do so i hope you like it and please comment positive helpful and thoughtful comments thank you
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Hi Chloe,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story but it did stop a bit suddenly. This is a great start for what could be a very creative and interesting story. Have you thought about making it longer or adding some more details another day?