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Wednesday, April 22, 2020

the mirror in the attic

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  1. Hi Chloe, Wow! What a great story. I really liked reading it. I would have loved to have a bit more information about what was going on behind the mirror but I did like your description of it being 'a dark cloudy place'. That gave me an image in my mind. Keep working to add extra details, other interesting words and descriptions.

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