Thursday, April 23, 2020
lost in the woods
this is my story i have been working on for 1 hour i hope you enjoy reading it and i would love if you comment positive helpful caring comments. thank you
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Hi Chloe, Great to see you are still keeping up with your writing. This is another story I enjoyed reading. I like the words 'she saw something in the distance'. It made it feel suspenseful. Are there other interesting words and phrases you could add to really give me an image in my mind about whats happening? For example you wrote 'she built a little hut', what out of? Was it rough, cold, warm? Keep up the great work!
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