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Monday, December 17, 2018

Collage

This is my collage it is a volcano with lava coming out of it and dust it took a while please give me feedback by Chloe.

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  2. Kia ora my name is Libby
    Positive: This is amazing because all of the colors and the texture
    Thoughtful: Did you know that in the middle of the lava it looks like a koro
    Helpful: Maybe you could ask a friend to take the photo for you so you can’t see outside otherwise really good
    question: Why did you want to do a volcano and nothing else?

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  3. Hi my name is saphy.
    I like that you used paper instead of paint.
    I like that you used different colours.
    maybe you cold use more red next time.

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